diff --git a/Lens/Simple.hs b/Lens/Simple.hs
--- a/Lens/Simple.hs
+++ b/Lens/Simple.hs
@@ -1,13 +1,20 @@
 {-#LANGUAGE CPP, RankNTypes #-}
 module Lens.Simple (
     
-    -- * Fundamental lens combinators: @view@, @set@ and @over@ \- also known as @(^.)@, @(.~)@ and @(%~)@
+    -- * The fundamental lens operations: @view@, @set@ and @over@ 
     view
     , set
     , over
 
+
+    -- * Stock lenses (@_1@, @_2@) and mere traversals (@_Left@, @_Right@, @_Just@, etc.) for simple Prelude types
+    , _1
+    , _2
+    , _Left, _Right
+    , _Just, _Nothing
+    , both
+    
     -- * @LensLike@ and important strength-expressing synonyms, from the all-powerful @Lens@ downward
-    , LensLike 
     , Lens 
     , Traversal 
     , Setter 
@@ -15,16 +22,16 @@
     , Fold
     , FoldLike 
     , SetterLike
-    
+    , LensLike 
     
-    -- * Simple Prelude lenses (@_1@, @_2@) and traversals (@_Left@, @_Right@, @_Just@, etc.)
-    , _1
-    , _2
-    , _Left, _Right
-    , _Just, _Nothing
-    , both
+    -- * Support for defining lenses and weaker \'optics\' (see also the TH incantations below )
+    , lens
+    , iso
+    , to
+    , setting
+    , folding
     
-    -- * Common lens-applying operators: particularly @view\/(^.)@,  @set\/(.~)@, @over\/(%~)@
+    -- * Operator equivalents for common lens-applying operators: particularly @(^.)@, @(.~)@ and @(%~)@ (i.e. @view@, @set@ and @over@)
     , (^.)
     , (%~)
     , (.~)
@@ -34,21 +41,12 @@
     , (^..)
     , (^?)
     
-    
-    -- * Lens forming support (see also the TH incantations below )
-    , lens
-    , iso
-    , to
-    , setting
-    
-
-    -- * Basic state related combinators: @zoom@, @use@, @assign\/(.=)@ etc.
+    -- * Basic state-related combinators: @zoom@, @use@, @assign\/(.=)@ etc.
     , zoom
     , zoom_
     , use, uses
     , assign
     
-    
     -- * Convenient state-related operators 
     , (%=)
     , (.=)
@@ -74,7 +72,7 @@
     , mapped
 
     -- * Other combinators
-    , folding, views
+    , views
     , toListOf, allOf, anyOf, firstOf, lastOf, sumOf, productOf
     , lengthOf, nullOf
     , backwards
@@ -133,7 +131,7 @@
 (??) :: Functor f => f (a -> b) -> a -> f b
 ff ?? a = fmap ($ a) ff
 {-# INLINE (??) #-}
-
+ 
 type SetterLike a a' b b' = LensLike Identity a a' b b'
 
 (?~) :: Setter a a' b (Maybe b') -> b' -> a -> a'
diff --git a/lens-simple.cabal b/lens-simple.cabal
--- a/lens-simple.cabal
+++ b/lens-simple.cabal
@@ -1,66 +1,60 @@
 name:                lens-simple
-version:             0.1.0.6
+version:             0.1.0.7
 synopsis:            simplified import of elementary lens-family combinators
 
 description:         This module, <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/lens-simple/docs/Lens-Simple.html Lens.Simple>, 
-                     just re-exports the main modules from Russell O\'Connor's 
-                     <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/lens-family lens-family> 
-                     package, the original <http://r6.ca/blog/20120623T104901Z.html van Laarhoven lens> library. 
+                     just re-exports the main modules from Russell O\'Connor's
+                     <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/lens-family lens-family> package.
+                     @lens-family@ is particularly remarkable for its minute number of dependencies:
+                     apart from <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/mtl mtl> 
+                     they are all ghc \'boot\' libraries.
                      @Lens.Simple@ also re-exports @makeLenses@ and 
-                     other TH incantations from Dan Burton's associated 
+                     other convenient TH incantations from Dan Burton's associated 
                      <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/lens-family-th lens-family-th>. 
-                     The idea is just to make a sort of low-powered, minimal-dependency @lens-family@ equivalent of 
+                     .
+                     The idea, then, is just to make a sort of low-powered, minimal-dependency, @lens-family@ equivalent of 
                      the 800 lb gorilla of lens library imports:
                      .
                      > import Control.Lens
                      .
-                     to wit, the elegant and spritely:
+                     namely, the light-weight and elegant:
                      .
                      > import Lens.Simple
                      .
-                     Check it out, it's even one character shorter! 
-                     .
-                     If you are unfamiliar with the use of what O'Connor calls van Laarhoven 
-                     lenses, you might take a 
-                     look at the excellent <http://www.serpentine.com/wreq/tutorial.html tutorial> 
-                     for the <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/wreq wreq> 
-                     library. All of the tutorial material will compile if you replace 
-                     @import Control.Lens@ with the suave @import Lens.Simple@.
-                     The error messages you get might be a little less opaque. But
-                     the point is basically academic, of course: you have already weighed down your 
-                     sandbox with the @lens@ library by installing @wreq@ and if you get 
-                     any deeper into @wreq@ you will need it. 
+                     Check it out, it's even one character shorter!
                      .
-                     As another illustration of the simplicity of the 
-                     fundamental van Laarhoven lens combinators, note that the gloss 
+                     As an illustration of the simplicity of the 
+                     fundamental van Laarhoven lens combinators - and their homogeneity with 
+                     @Control.Lens@ - note that the gloss
                      <https://github.com/michaelt/lens-family-simple/blob/master/examples/Pong.hs pong example> 
-                     from the @lens@ library examples directory requires only this 
-                     abbreviating change of imports. 
-                     If you care to make that program more complicated, 
-                     you might at some point need 
-                     the unfathomably more sophisticated material in @Control.Lens@. 
-                     Within its more limited sphere, @lens-family@ accords as 
+                     from the @lens@ library examples directory - which continues to be
+                     the best introductory lens tutorial precisely by saying nothing -
+                     requires /only/ this abbreviating change of imports. 
+                     If you make that program more complicated, 
+                     you might of course end up needing
+                     the more sophisticated material in @Control.Lens@ and 
+                     its immense mass of dependencies.
+                     Within its more limited sphere, though, @lens-family@ accords as 
                      far as possible with @lens@, so this switch 
-                     will often be all that is necessary to begin using them.
+                     will often be all that is necessary to begin using them. 
                      .
                      This module was originally intended to simplify the use of packages that 
-                     follow the original promise of the van Laarhoven lenses. Correct practice is
-                     to export lenses without depending on a lens-library, where possible; 
-                     in basic cases these use just familiar @Prelude@ types. 
-                     Examples of best practices in this respect are
+                     follow the original promise of the van Laarhoven lenses. 
+                     /Correct practice is to export lenses without depending on a lens-library, where possible./
+                     In basic cases these just use familiar @Prelude@ types, after all. 
+                     Examples of best practices in this respect are e.g. <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/lens-family-th lens-family-th> which
+                     doesn't depend on @lens-family@ despite its name and pipes-related packages like
                      <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/pipes-bytestring pipes-bytestring> 
                      and <http://hackage.haskell.org/package/pipes-group pipes-group>. 
-                     Because of the heavily monadic character of those libraries, the 
+                     Because of the heavily monadic character of the latter libraries, the 
                      extra material in @Control.Lens@ is rarely of use anyway; one sticks largely
-                     to @view\/(^.)@, @set\/(.~)@, @over\/(%~)@ and @zoom@.
+                     to @view@, @set@, @over@ and, for state operations, @zoom@.
                      .
-                     Note that many of the other lenses and combinators are a bit more 
+                     Note that lenses and other combinators are here frequently a bit more 
                      specialized than their @Control.Lens@ equivalents: 
                      for example, _1 and _2 are here 
                      familiarly specialized to act just on real Haskell
-                     pairs. With the loss of abstraction we also of course
-                     lose the concomitant opaque error messages 
-                     about @Field1 s t a b@ etc.
+                     pairs. 
 
 homepage:            https://github.com/michaelt/lens-simple
 license:             BSD3
